Boomnm's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pixel Cityscape]

strong first post, just wish the city wasn't one layer

[Mr. Eraser]

great for what it is but you might wanna change your file format, edges of this are blurry and semi-deepfried.

[The Decayed]

sick shit dude, for my only comment i'd say the height of the background doesn't match the angle of the guy all too well, otherwise it gets better the more u look at it.

[I am back guys. First painting after months]

this is real nice, but it feels like you could've added some subtle effects or details to really make it pop more, especially that sky. this is a great concept but it could've been refined with more time bro.

[28 05 2002]

RIP

[apollo 11]

the composition is outta this world (haha get it) but i think for some improvement you maybe would want to slap some noise/grain on there for a slight bit of texture, and spend a little more time on details (but i'm assuming you had a deadline for this) to make the whole thing pop more.

JulienGerards responds:

yes I barely made this one in time. So yes, I also think that I could improve a few thing but I feel like it would be kind of nitpicking at this stage. but Thanks for the review nonetheless, it help to improve

[ELECTROKENESIS Page 1]

seems like an okay first page, i'd suggest investing in a few alcohol markers and then sticking to flat and neat fills of colour to give your characters a more iconic feel through the use of colour palletes (for example, ONLY yellow for "shocker", and maybe ONLY red for antoher character (with the exception being a colour pallete of 2 or 3 colours.).

Also, the layout of the panels seems very sparse on this page, so unless it's a one off (given by the large title at the bottom, i think it is), i'd condense it a bit more to make each page more worth reading/looking into.

ShootDaCheese responds:

The media I’m using is some pencils for basic outlines, then reoutlining with sharpie pen. I’ve never used alcohol markers before but maybe I can look into it. I’ll also see about adding more per page, I do realize that action is pretty little with so much free space, I intended for the page to just throw you in at the start.

[The Bully King]

rude

[Madness Joyride]

We did ittt, happy MD guys.

[seacoast]

The lighting is super realistic, well done on that. The boat almost really feels like a 3d item rendered in a pixel filter. However the tires look super odd, as if their shadow is part of them and that there's a random line going through them, I think you could fix that with a slightly brighter shadow that'd help distinguish the shadow from the tires.

radshoe responds:

man, big thanks for pointing that out! I totally overlooked that.. fixed it and it looks much better. ;D